@idlemind how could you think about writing in a caterpillar's POV? For a moment I felt like I was really one of those crawling thingies. Nice story!

You're welcome :)

Diving deep sea for $30,000,000 is definitely worth it without the shark in the picture. I wonder how much courage they have when they dived and when they had encountered the shark. If I were them, I could've

This is a wonderful love story. I wish I could hear the characters' voices, especially when they confessed their love for each other. :)

Euryce is a brave young lass because despite the warning of her elders, she opted to go home to see for herself if the water spirit would really take her. I'm guessing Dion is the water spirit who shapeshifted

Congratulations to all the honorable mentions @davidbright, @litguru, @idlemind, @itsostylish, @lordtimoty, and @diebitch for being the winner.

Don't mention it. It's worth the read :)

You're right. Reading other people's work also gives us ideas on various writing styles that we could try and use to our stories.

Thank you for appreciating it @diebitch :)

Thank you @itsostylish, congratulations as well :)😊

Congratulations to these talented authors, and thank you @inkwell for considering my story too. @kemmyb @smilejerry @itsostylish @stormcharmer @piratethanos Looking forward to reading your stories on the

Thank you for appreciating it. It's my first story. I hope I could get better the more I write here

That's great! I am also learning the way you do

Indeed. Receiving compliments or constructive criticisms help a writer here improve, which will also help readers be offered good read stories.

@brittandjosie Thank you for the compliment. It's nice to feel that my output is appreciated.

@abdul-qudus Thanks for the compliment. It means a lot to a new writer like me.

@theinkwell Thank you as well for the welcome.

Their childish play has cost someone a job. How unfortunate. I hope they've learned their lesson.

Hello everyone! This is my first post and entry in this community: I know my story might be a little different, but I hope someone reads it. Thank you in advance. I have left comments on @mrenglish's and