Hey everyone! I'm back with a progress report for my Sage fan art! ^^ Taking what ryivhnn said into consideration, I tried to adjust the position of the body, the gun and the face :> Well, it's very minimal because by the time I read his comments, I had already rendered most part of the body ;-; But I try!
I'm actually quite happy with my renders on the hand o.o I had no idea what I was doing at the time and just decided to add shadows on the fingers because I thought it'd make sense and it actually looks decent? >u< I tried to manipulate the face a bit to try to turn it a bit towards the viewers but I'm not sure how I did... Same with the body, I adjusted her chest a bit and moved the center of the body a bit to the right to make her turn towards the viewers a bit. Perspective really is not my strong suit.
I also added light on the face (will probably add more) because I felt that it was a bit too dark compared to the chest area. I love adding the light on the eyes at the end so my WIPs might look like her eyeballs are black and soulless but I swear I'll make sure it's not like that by the time I'm finished with it >u<
I also adjusted the body in general - made the upper body shorter because it looked a bit too long when I looked at it the next day x_x, adjusted her thigh area and made her bottom a bit higher because it felt a bit too low, oh! I also added a strand of hair on the left side of her head... Her previous hair looked a bit too tight so I added some loose hair.
That's pretty much everything I changed! ^^ I could've drawn more buuut Valorant sucks the life outta me x_x Also, I don't like forcing myself to draw because it usually ends up very potat >u< I'll be working on it again tomorrow with fresh eyes and hopefully I can improve it :>
I won't be putting my usual footer on this one because it's just a WIP >u<
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