Hello, 
A review goes pass introducing and describing an issue or item. You also need to clearly distinguish your review article from any other blog post or news. A review is the study and evaluation of an item clearly stating your merit and demerit of the said item followed by your verdict which includes your personal opinion on what you think could be improved or not all based on your perspective. This could be expressed in the "Conclusion" Sub of your review post. There are different ways in which you can structure your reviews, however, a reader should be able to identify that your content is a review and can learn from your personal opinion on the subject topic. This could even trigger a discussion from the readers of your review revealing their thoughts and opinion about the reviewed item.
In a nutshell, make your review express your personal feelings/opinions on a particular issue, subject or an item and make your decision on what you think could be improved, how you think it could be improved, why you think it should be improved etc clear.
You are a good writer and one thing I think you could improve on your review article it the format. Below are things to consider:
Start your review with an introduction clearly stating the item you want to review to catch your reader's attention.
The next thing to note is what you want to examine in the item. Clearly state them and discuss. I'd suggest that you use quotes or simple examples to help prove your points to your readers.
End your review with a conclusion note which briefly states the key point on your review. This section should also include your verdict or judgment about the topic or item and finally, your recommendation all based on what you think.
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