Hello, @shortsegments. This is a decent and very nice review of that poem. It reminded me of a lot of things. Hmmm, It really is nice. I am glad that you shared it alongside with your opinion.
I do have a suggestion though.

You mentioned that you found the poem online. I was hoping to see a link to the poem. Citation is very important and linking the original source of the poem at the beginning or the end of your review would not hurt. I am aware that the author is unknown, however, I believe that a link to the poem still can be found.
I really want to learn more about this poem. I appreciate the time you took to review it. Well done! I look forward to seeing your next awesome review.

Cheers!

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