RE: RE: 28 September, 2026 Freewriters Daily Writing Prompt Day 3240 | Prompt: bitch (bruja)
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RE: 28 September, 2026 Freewriters Daily Writing Prompt Day 3240 | Prompt: bitch (bruja)

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...the blow that sent him reeling came from left field so quickly that he didn't see it coming.

In my opinion, that blow should have come much earlier. Kendrick had me shaking my head through most of this story. His attitude and teenage defiance showed that he really thought he had an answer for everything. You captured the issue of teenagers and peer pressure very well. Sometimes they pick up and use derogatory words and phrases as though they make them sound cool or grownup without thinking about what those words actually mean or the hurt they can cause.

I'm also glad Malcolm didn't dismiss his son's attitude as "kids being kids". Instead he made Kendrick think about the words and the impact they could have. One careless choice of words turned what started as a peaceful Saturday morning into a difficult one for both him and his parents. A satisfying ending with Kendrick realising he had something to apologise for!

An interesting and well-written piece. Do take care and have a beautiful day. 🌹

@kemmyb: ...the blow that | Ecency