What a touching piece! The last sentence caught me off guard as I wanted to read more but didn't realise this was a series.

Your story is gripping from start to finish. Naomi is a courageous woman and I wondered whether life would give her some break at a point. I see the pinwheel as a symbol of her grief, showing how life keeps moving even when she feels like she has lost so much. Sadly, she isn't give much of a chance to mourn because her grandchildren still need her. I do hope the letter brings some good news for her. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

Beautifully written as always. Take care. 🌹