😱 Marvin Jr sold three years of his life to the Ministry of Linear Time and they literally came to collect! At first, I assumed the Ministry might collect in some other way, but the way you built the story and brought us to such an intriguing ending was both creative and clever. I guess that's the consequence of an impulsive choices. Marvin Jr wasn't thinking clearly when he made the deal. Poor Alice. I wonder where the Ministry sent her son to.

An interesting and well-written piece. Do take care and have a beautiful day. 🌹