Your story is touching and rich with tension. I see Anthony and Catherine as opposites. He thinks she's cold but it's her way of dealing with the situation. She understands the risks of being married to a sailor and has lived it many times. Anthony is more like a hopeful Thomas—he must 'see' for himself.
I admire Catherine's resilience. One could say that she's weak but I disagree. Moving on even when the heart is heavy is strength! A fine and well-written story. Nicely done. ✨
!PIMP
RE: Freewrite: 3/1/24 | Prompt: A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words [Eng/Esp]