Oh my, this narrator's resentment against social inequality is palpable! This is an enjoyable read. You put us in the narrator's head and her raging thoughts raise questions. Her voice is raw, filled with such bitterness, anger and envy that I want to reach into your story and pull her out of this situation.

Her struggle is one most people are familiar with—the class disparity in every society. Often, it's the lower class that rails against the upper for their privileged lifestyle. But I'm curious about Beatrice Brampton and her connection with the narrator.

Your vivid description of this wealthy woman is fascinating so it's not surprising that the narrator admires and hates her at the same time. You have me in suspense as to the narrator's next move? Will she openly express her resentment to Harrison during the inspection or keep mute and continue to stew in her turmoil?

Another exciting series! I look forward to the next part. Nicely done. ✨
!PIMP