Hello @deking01. Looks like you had a lovely time for a good purpose as a child dedication. Everyone looks happy for the occasion.

I've read a few of your posts and wanted to mention a couple item I feel will help you. When writing in a semi-formal setting as Hive, you may want to abandon the use of the letter "u" for the formal word "you".

Also, the letter "i" is always capitalized when referring to yourself, no matter if the beginning of a sentence or elsewhere.

Thanks for your sharing your event. Take care.

!ALIVE