I liked your poem. I think poetry is well accepted on this platform but it takes a lot of patience to get established and have a following. May I suggest that you don't put the tag (Poetry) in the title and try to use a photo and title that grabs the reader's interest - what you did was fine, but you don't want just fine, you want to capture the reader's attention. I often spend more time searching for a photo than writing my poem. The photo says more visually than you might expect and it can be used to illustrate another aspect of the poem. The same goes for the title- time spent on these two elements of your post will make a big difference . Hope this helps.