People eskaping (escaping), jumping out of buildings, landing near cars, like an old tornado Twister film.
The following is something written by a nine or ten year old, or something like that. The kid who wrote and drew up this story was none other than me around 1995 or something like that. Grammar corrections, updates, edits, are added and shown in bold, in order to help show you how things were.
I also added commas, periods, punctuation marks.
Enjoy.
The fire which was broken up (spreading or stopped), was a big fire, it blow up (blew up) some building (buildings) and towers.
Some people was (were) in it but after got out very very fast right by cars they exskape (escape) to.
Right after the buildings blow up (erupted),
some people jump out (jumped out) of there (their) windows
just to get out before there (their) home where they live (lived) got blow (blown) up with them because they don't want to die even if some was (were)
on the 50th story high (which is sky high), they knew that they rather jump out of the 5th (50th) story to the ground and get hurt then (than) not jump out at all and die in the building.
But ofer (others) didn't, they try ofer (other) ways to get out, they got trap (trapped) in the building.
After the buildings fell down and blow up (exploded), the fire truck came and stop (stopped) the fire.
Lot of other people came, got all the hurt peaple (people) and took them to the hosipol (hospital) and others was (were) fund (found).
In a year from then (a year later), the place was all ready for rebuilding agian (again).
The bad guy that don it or ton it (done it) was funt or fund (found) and gone (sent) to jail for life.
By Joey Arnold
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2018-07-19 Thursday 11:32 AM LMS - Building Fire
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