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RE: In Perpetuity (An Original Poem)

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Hello, dear friend ericvancewalton@ericvancewalton

The poetry you write is admirable. I love this verse.

"I stand at the edge of this fleeting world,
where goodbyes bloom like weeds, stubborn and wild.
In perpetuity, I'll carry with me this quiet wound,
wondering if you, too, ever paused to look back?"

Thank you so much for sharing your compositions.

Have a beautiful afternoon.