Hi there 
To that end, let me give you a few pointers and ask a couple of questions.
First, that image at the top, or should I say the only image. Did you create that yourself?
If not, you should give credit to who or where you got it and if it was with permission, otherwise you risk plagiarism (using someone else property without permission) That is very bad juju here in the Hive blockchain.
If you DID create it, then you would be doing yourself a favor and say how you created it, what software for instance?
In your post, you are very repetetive, the first two paragraphs you are basically saying the same thing over and over.
I am not trying to bash you, but as you have asked for some guidance, I want to help you as best I can to not fall into bad habits or traps, and create content that will be truly original and will make the readers want to come back for more.
Blessings of the day to you.
RE: Introduction