I think you did a great job! My only suggestion would be to remove your name from the beginning of either the middle or last paragraph. (Think probably the last) it is just a lot of repition saying Darren as the first word to all three paragraphs. Perhaps use "he" on the last one and see if you could substitute the middle one with something else.

Otherwise, super!

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