What an amazing story! I started reading part three first and was a little lost, so I went to your blog to begin at, well, the beginning. I'm so glad I did! I love the way you melded menu's straight to the characters. It made me feel as if that is the way characters in RPG's would feel if they were live, conscious beings. You write very well and I was on the edge of my seat for much of the story. You conveyed Luisa's personality amazingly. I could feel her uncertainty and angst in every interaction with her. She leveled quickly in the three parts but it didn't feel rushed, it felt like her inner strength, will, and determination carried her forward faster than even she thought possible. I want more! I want to know of her hurdles as she ascends from the well. I want to know if Marco survived. Does she, in fact, learn flight and become an Angel? This was an amazing read. Thank you.