Hello @freedomtowrite,

An interesting story that comes in chapters. Lola's guilt over the death of her husband Kyle hooks the reader, the third-person narrative lets you flow with the main character. I like your style. Of what was read in the introduction to Lola's book, there are 56 short chapters like these two that I just read, it would be convenient for you to go leaving links to the previous chapters.

Thanks for sharing your creative writing.