@killerwot Hey bro, Wow, great story, and happy to meet a fellow vegetarian; perhaps one day we can enjoy some veggies together. :)

Hmm. "The Happy Pear" .. hRmmmmm.. this place?
https://thehappypear.ie/our-cafe-and-shop/
If so, wow, it looks great!

Re: Editor.
I would love to read your book for sure (*Shadow Run games when I was a lad were a passion of mine). I am not sure if I could provide good editing, though as I tend to be a bit wild with my grammar and punctuation. But, again, I would like to read the story!