indigowaltz

Great post! I loved the artwork!

Cool, thanks a bunch!

You kept me reading again! Not many people can, so kudos! I hope you'll check out my latest 45 minute attempt at art in it's entirety. It's a my first non-poem in almost a year.

I couldn't agree more! I hope you enjoy the holidays @fairtalelife.

Thanks! Be sure to check out my other writing. :)

My constant poetry explains the occasional comma misuse, you know, because grammar is less of a priority with poetry.

Thanks for the advice, but I meant what I said. You as a writer should know the abstract use of words like "interrogate." Most words have some leeway with regard to creative freedom. I used the

Haha, yeah, I see where you're coming from. It's as appealing as dark humor, and it rhymes! How can you get any better.

Thank you for your comment, it means a lot. I assure you though, this poem is the opposite of a suicide note. It's more of a complaint about the depression that follows abandonment. The title's reference

Very nice sound. I'm glad you were able to find your own way of phrasing such an exhausted message. Check out some of my poetry! I'm only 16, but I'm sure you'll find some similarities between our writing.

Thanks @fairytalelife, I'm glad you can relate to what I said. Oh, and I really look forward to more from you @ericvancewalton!

Very nice poem. I tend to be bored with this kind of rhythm and description, but you managed to keep me until the very end. I love how you're work seems to feel so familiar and yet not all that generic.

Thanks for the comments, it means a lot!

Cool, comment what you think! :D

Thanks! You might like my poems "Ritalin," and "Green Eyes." Those are very similar. However, love poems aren't exactly my best, still, it means a lot that you enjoyed it.

Great poem! I am a young poet. I am 16 and have been writing for just a couple of years. I would love for someone like you to check my poetry out, it would mean a lot!

Thanks! Don't forget to check my other work out, I'm sure if you enjoyed this you will enjoy my other poems too!

Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I drew the image and wrote the poem during my 6th period class. It's always seems to be the quick-writes that sound best.

Thanks! I think confusion is best resolved with a set rhyming pattern, that way exploration is less draining.

That means a lot!