Thank you for joining in with our group. All three of your poems are great!
Two suggestions: 1st, be sure to use the #pimp tag and the #indiaunited tag. If you use the pimp tag and give two comments for every poem you post, you will be eligible for the pimp drawing at the end of the week. And if you use the indiaunited tag, you may be curated by them.
2nd, you might want to space your poems out a little, maybe every other day, instead of posting them all at once.
But anyway, thanks for joining and I hope you enjoy it here!
RE: TORN