RE: RE: Skin-deep emotions
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RE: Skin-deep emotions

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I'm confused as to whether you meant to say "twin brother" in the 3rd to the last paragraph.
Howbeit,it's a nicely written story,BIM especially awed by your consistency while using the present tense. Not so many writers achieve that easily.
I think that Kira shouldn't be running away but to face her fears. That's the only way she's ever getting out of the trauma she's in.

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