This one looks fine, but I wish I had done something else.
I don't know what it needs.
It done though and I like it.
I always have this feeling that I could do something more.
This is what the piece looks like without using the pencils as a guideline.
I pretty much drew the whole thing again, but the pencil are the glue that keeps the whole thing together. It gives it a bit more depth, texture and a sense of weight to the piece(this is what I think anyway)
Since I designed this piece with the pencils in mind, they being apart just shows the importance a structure from which you can work from. I couldn't possibly do any of my paintings without the pencil drawings I make. I'm bad at drawing out of my head using the digital media.