V.3. Communities

"A community is an account that is also set as a category for the content published in it. Upon its creation, a new account is generated and is then granted a modifiable label to display on the frontends."
I find this generates questions about the limitations on community accounts. Can community accounts post, hold tokens, vote, flag, create accounts, and etc. How do members affect community accounts, and what affects do community accounts have on members, or non-members? Please ensure all such questions are answered.

Added somewhat to it. A community account is the same as any other account.

How is this measured, and what does 'domination' entail?

Added some to it. Getting into measurement is a frontend question that would take away from the whitepaper.

I hope that the previous suggestion of answering questions community accounts bring up makes this language obsolete, as I don't really know specifically what it means in terms of inflation, posting, rewards and etc.

They can be used as regular accounts but usually aren't. They don't by default make money but could. There are creative ways to use them.

V.4. Qualitative Content-based Inputs
Strike. Do mention apps and games, please.

Done.

Please find a way to say this without using contribution three times in one sentence.

Haha done.

V.5. Content Monetization
"...approximated..."
No. Make the bad word go away please. There is certainly a more concise way to state the entire sentence with that word in it. The word 'subjective' probably belongs in that more concise sentence.

Replaced with 'subjective'.

Add 'and some only consume.' or something.

Reworded it somewhat.

V.6. Distributing Currency Rewards
I question the inclusion of the word 'currency' above. Please give it thought.

I thought about it and took away the word 'currency'. Rewards may come in different forms, including in various tokens that may not be meant to be labeled as currency.

'65% of inflation is distributed as rewards through the rewards pool.'

'...participate in creation and/or curation of content."

Debating if 'the' should be in there ... 'the creation' ... 'the curation'. Will think on it.

"The reward pool is filled out of 65% of the inflation."
Strike

We'd have a sentence starting off unclearly and with a percentage if we change those two lines. "The reward pool is used to distribute funds to those who actively participate in creation and/or curation of content. The funding for the reward pool is composed out of 65% of the inflation." is the new version.

VI. CONCLUSION

I think 'a constantly evolving' fits better here. It's less alliterative, and therefore it sounds more grounded.

Done.

'...fuel mass adoption of all cryptocurrencies by introducing new people to Hive.', or 'fuel mass adoption of cryptocurrencies by serving as a gateway' to new users, or just 'fuel mass adoption of cryptocurrencies.' This reduces the passive voice which makes the statement more affirmative.

Good point. Rewrote it to say: "Hive is a constantly evolving and innovative ecosystem that aims to fuel mass adoption of blockchain technology and cryptocurrencies."

'designed to scale with widespread adoption' or 'mass adoption'. One adjective is enough, and two sounds grasping. Scale is a good buzzword.

Aptly caught, fixed.

'Incorporating...' or 'By combining...'

Done.