Yo, Brian's a dick. 😂😛

Lovely sad story with some highlight moments. Specifically the "What about me?" line. This read more as poetry rather than prose, which is more than fine with me.

But it definitely lacks an oomf. If you're curious I can go into more detail on how you'd achieve this. If not, I'm happy you decided to publish your story here. 😌👏

Cheers and have a nice day. 🍻