Lmao what a shit format, fucking retard. Read some guides before you go out to embarrass yourself offering "freebies" that come out worse than the original. I'd rather read a wall of text than your abomination.

Some tips on what not to do:

• Don't use elipses in titles. You can't just randomly h1 the first clause of the first sentence.
• Don't make a list and then continue afterwards as if the list were a sentence. This only works sometimes.
• Don't randomly start paragraphs in bold like this. It's stupid.
• Don't make random quote blocks (>) in the middle of nowhere for no reason. This is one of the most stupid habits I've seen and it's fucking gross.

What to do instead:

• Titles are thematic, they should be able to stand alone grammatically. Ideally, you make a new one instead of cannibalizing the first part of the paragraph, and it should describe the topic being talked about in the next few paragraphs. They are semantic separators, give them some respect.
• Lists are made of independent items that should only rarely be tied to outer grammatical elements.
• Use bold to highlight important elements.
• Use quotes (>) to quote, not to highlight or create variety.