First of all, do you have installed the font? Because, the svg app need to read the font, to be able to display it. In your image here, the font is not one i have attached in the pack.

Second, what app you use to open the svg files?

And 3rd: Do you really need svg file? Because, svg is ok, if you need for printing extremely big logo on big areas, to be vectorized, but, if you need just for web sites, or printing logo on paper, you go better with png files. It is broad supported format, and you can't go wrong with it.

I can render for you png in one big resolution, and you can make it smaller like you need it.

On my end, the pack is ok, the svg files are ok all the files, like in the previous pack, you have the logo, the banner, all the logos together on the 3 backgrounds, and the font.

Should i send you in png format too? It is much better option for working on web with it.