We don't get it when someone gets off track. We should try it out more often. I really enjoyed how you put freedom (madness) down. I could the MC happiness about it.

Most of the time, we have to face people who don't understand us. We don't want to act like everybody, and that's ok. There are as many responses as people in the world. I reckon this story portrays it

Versos que hacen recordar la infancia movida de otrora. Gracias por compartir.

Muchas gracias.

I like how this story stands up for Christmas magic. Most of it depends on artificial things nowadays, but this post brings what really matters: celebrating we can have a brilliant future together as humans,

Muchas gracias.

Thank you!!!

Gracias por leer y comentar. Aprecio mucho tu apoyo, @rinconpoetico7. ¡Feliz año nuevo! Mis mejores deseos para ti.

This story feels like watching a movie. Good thing Ramir was smart and skifull enough to keep Christmas alive!

Imagine kidnapping Santa to get what you asked for, but never getting a present again instead. That's really funny! The MC portrays our hunger for rewards when we do something good for others. Maybe when

After all, I guess people just love some Christmas action😂 Thanks!

In the end, Christmas is about forgiveness, isn't it? I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading.

Thanks!!

Nice viewpoint on it. Thanks for your comment.

I am still figuring the final out. I was expecting the mom to confront her family in rage, or probably in a silence that turned everything upside down. Anyway, I liked its pace and chaotic, desperate tone.

Most of the time we forget-or even don't know-how peaceful silence can be. This post reminded me of that. Your description probably allows readers to go through your experience and sort of feel that peace

To me, this reads very poetically. I really enjoyed how you managed to put all that tension between the couple to somehow free and make them reconnect again in spite of all the monotony. Great job!

Dios siempre está cuando otros no. Qué linda fe en tus versos.