Hey @erh.germany,

I absolutely love this story!

Not only is it an exceptionally well written erotic sci-fi fiction, but I find it's deeply thought provoking on many levels.

Betty seems to have quite a different perspective on the virtual space sex than Zack does. Her view seems to be more oriented towards thinking about future implications of allowing Zack to just do whatever he wants to her whenever he wants. In this sense I think she's probably a lot more mature than Zack.

What happens to her during her virtual sex ritual is both horrifying and intriguing. Intriguing because of her response to being raped by an unseen force. It's like she's thinking about the monotony of pleasuring men through a digital interface for an uncertain amount of time and she finds it repetitious and boring, and then something comes along and throws a wrench in the mix, and she likes it?

The question of the unseen raping force goes deeper, in the aspect of a manifestation attraction from... her. Did she attract this force because of her thoughts and influences into the ether? These are the kind of questions that your story incites the reader to start thinking about.

It forces the reader to approach their sets of beliefs and morals in a different perspective. The setting of not being on earth makes it a foreign environment, and so the impact on how the human behavior and thought process(es) would work should surely be impacted. Whether the impact is positive or negative or a combination of both is yet another mystery.

The provocation to the thoughts does not stop here... She talks to the computer Harry, and when he (would AI be genderless?) it offered some aid in getting to the bottom of things, her response influences the reader to believe that not only has she decided to leave the mystery be, she also wants some more of that mysterious action that gave her such an intense orgasm.

I thought those illustrations were amazing too and that they fit the story so perfectly. I was wondering if you found them from a website or something, and appreciate that you shared that they were from a book you own. Somehow I didn't notice they were photos of book art until you explained, probably because I was so intently immersed in this amazing story of yours!

Thanks for sharing your amazing stories with us. You have such a brilliant creative mind my friend. 🤗