Intriguing! I love it! Very interested to read more. Not bad at all. Haha.

Some words needed to be plural in some spots and what have you, but hey what can I say? My posts are never perfect either. But it is nice to read another action story written here in the hive. Maybe some day we can collaborate! Wouldn't that be something... Have my character Bentley meet up with lulu and do a deal for his brain pills. Food for thought...keep writing it was wonderful!