RE: RE: El tiempo / Contenido Original (Poema)
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RE: El tiempo / Contenido Original (Poema)

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Hola, linarev@linarev.

Bonitos versos, me gustaron. Faltan afinar detalles, comas, puntos y seguidos, incluso puntos y aparte, si logras perfeccionar eso, serías imparable.

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