Haha! Ya that would be bad.
I thought I would try a different approach to writing, where there is no narration, just he words being spoken of the characters, what they say sets the scene. In my mind I feel like it gives a bit of an edge as we can't aren't given that extra, kind of like not being able to see around the corner.
What do you think?
Feels good to be back for sure :D
RE: A Valentine Horror (Short Story)