Your bending of the word poem is poetry in itself, or maybe art! Thank you so much, I really appreciate your comment and writing/continuing of the poem. And just to console you, almost everything has been done. If we follow the post-modern stance, everything is just copies of copies or pastich! So your poem, if not original, is original in its lack of originality. Or something philosophical in that line of thought! Maybe when you train that muscle it will begin to work! But alas, your art and storytelling are poetic in nature.