Thank you!

That's devastating. I'm so sorry this happened to you.

I'm not sure I'd agree that there's no trigger. The first sentence seems like a trigger to me! All the rest of the story is how it is now that you know she's out of danger, and the part before the trigger

I have at least two Nano novels that I'd like to have tidied up and made readable but somehow I just never know where to start with them. I'm good at flash fiction (comparatively so, anyway!) but longer

Thank you!

I really like this. It reads so easily you'd never guess that the writer was constrained by a 50 word limit!

My first fifty worder: When Life Doesn't Give You Lemons

Thank you!

Thank you!