Actually it's is the first time I've heard of Dragoons; I thought he joined the Golden Dragons, lol. I find the narrative style somehow unusual or challenging to follow, which is understandable knowing its influence from the source culture or language. The story lacks lots of important details. For example, the story provides little backstory about La Fleur's life before he joined the Golden Dragoons. Additional context about his family could help us to know more info about his background. Also, I think the wicked man who buried the Princess lacks a clear motive for his actions. Providing insight into his reasons for committing such an atrocious act would make him a more compelling antagonist.

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