I think your "character" has character! I especially like the way he's holding his cigar (or is that a blunt?), as if he's playing it like a flute between draws on it. This reminds me of the time we had to draw an old man for art class. I did alright for someone who can't draw much at all. Love the overhead shot with the phone out of focus, and the focus on the art. Well done! :)