That's a good rundown. I really enjoyed the video game this one was based off of. The trailers look cool, but even in it you could tell something important was missing from the final product. As for your

Much thanks! This is sort of a protoype for a novel I hope to release in the fall. The novel will fill in all the little bits. Here it's raw and to the point using an old pulp short story formula Bryce

I believe this post was curated by Curie. From what I understand they upvote promising authors starting their Steemit journey. Congratulations!

I had intended to make the time frame of her last performance more apparent. Should this get reworked I'll add that her last performance is happening the following day. The story still works as is, but

"He had written it into her coding Himself; blessed her with the sentience of enslavement, and the free-will to comply." That's a nicely wrapped cannoli with sweet custard inside. Beautiful.

White Hawk and Sable Swan are some kick ass names!

It does read like a noir detective story without a gumshoe. It has the femme fatale showing up to enlist help on a "case". She could be an honest victim or part of an elaborate trap!

Glad to see you joined the PulpRev Discord in addition to the Isle of Write. It's a great community. Your feedback stokes the creative flame and ups the steaks. Failure is not an option! Cast me into the

Thank you for checking it out Rawle. I hope you find the pay off satisfying. If not, I expect you to let me have it. No need for a gentle touch in those regards!

That means a lot to me. Positive feedback let's me know what is working and negative feedback let's me know what is not. Both are regarded as a favor. The door for feedback will remain ever ajar!

I love subliminal elements. Next time I'll have to consciously add them. And thanks for pointing it out. That sounds like a neat trick to play with.

Thanks Kes. A Merritt is a big inspiration to me. Was hoping to grab his sense of atmosphere to setup a little intrigue and mystery before the action begins. Adding some more character building and background

There may be no pirates. There may be no dashing rogues or warrior princesses. But the swamp will forever be a warm place in my memory because that is where we met.

To my Dove: Happy Valentine's babe!

Allow me to sperg... "The entire reason they were so admittedly bloodthirsty near the end of "Ill Met in Lankhmar" is because the women they loved had been burned alive by the Thieves'

Who watches the watchers? I've been a lurker of your social feed for awhile too. Glad to see you on Steemit.

Nice intro Bennett. Steemit may portend to be the next PulpRev anthology with no submission deadlines. An exciting journey just begun!

Glad to meet a fellow traveler. I look forward to your contributions to SteemPulp.