Was it the Beatles with "Strawberry fields forever"? And The prodigy with "Smack my bitch up?" At least your lines remind me of that music. A deliberate allusion? Memories of Blade Runner flash up here and there, and is Athena, the goddess of cities, wisdom and battle, the namesake for your utopia?

"Mind your (own) business" reminds me on the funniest SF story I ever read - look at this: "And then there were none" by Frank Russel, I think you are going to like it :)