You have turned an everyday occurrence into an adventure! Very well written, I was on the edge of my seat the whole while, from the moment the clock showed the time, I was rooting for Cami. Interesting how you took the female perspective, seemingly without any effort. How many women did you watch dressing and doing their hair? ;-)

And how sorry I felt for her, the embarrassment of the situation, the poor rushed creature! However, I think she could have laughed along, when the whole train was so wonderfully entertained by her. In my mind's eye, she behaved perfectly naturally with bare thighs, as if she were fully clothed, and then began her flirtation with Mister Right. LOL

Your choice of words: just wonderful, so fluidly written. You did well to get the work out of your archive, we were just talking about it.