Sounds pretty good your entry. I would like to know if what you just performed is a cover of the song you mention. The intention of the jamming zone is to improvise on something already created or to create music from scratch. Of course following musical elements such as: harmony, chords, scale or melody. Something I see you know very well.

On the other hand, I would like you to read again the jamming zone rules. One of them is the 300 characters in your post. The lyrics, if you have them, don't count.

One more thing, we should always take care of our perfomance even if we don't consider it important in many occasions, it's always good to keep it in mind.

I liked the melody that you gave us 🤟🏼