I am currently editing the individual details that I had added to my entry to forest folk festival dancing fireflies. Details I mean the individual dancers I put there to create the dance scene. Now that the contest is over and entries been judged I can go back and see what I can do to improve without worrying about time and deadlines
I took my time revising but I didn’t want to be very different from the original. Here the dancer’s face is visible and I defined the character to make it look elfin by giving it a pointy set of ears and nose. The green leaf like drapery stayed the same but the pink fluffy thing around its shoulder is now fluffier and bigger covering both shoulders.
The original version is more lively and dynamic because of its pose as if it were dancing unlike the new one it is resting.
