RE: RE: No Fuzzy Peaches At All, a freewrite poem
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RE: No Fuzzy Peaches At All, a freewrite poem

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Hardly surprising since I've never written one, though I used to write song lyrics or my band many moons ago.

Here's the only two I can still remember:

Daylight dawns
robots wake
eat cornflakes
use colgate
catch the bus
read the news
good morning sir
lunch at two
hello Charles,
how's aul' Kate
return to desk
don't be late
leave at six
fuck the rain
meet the usuals on the train

Cannot remember the next two lines

bed at 12 another day
daylight dawns

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The sharpest blade
the hangman's noose
the tablet vial
the lid is loose
the last drawn breath
the waiting peace
the trail of blood
from life release.