Very good! Beautiful poem. Another translation I've read is:

Mt. Tianmen at the place where the river separates and opens up
Bluish-green water flows around a cliff, then turns to the north.

Departing where the two riverbanks face the green mountains
A slice of the sun on the horizon behind a solitary sail.

by Larry Elder and his wife, Ning Qinzhong

Please keep them coming. I enjoy your shares.