Changeable Weather ~ Original Haiku

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I was cold this morning, then hot around noon, then it rained and I was cold again. I wrote this.

cold, then hot
then cold once again
beginning of autumn

I also wrote an alt version.

cold to warm
and back again, several times
beginning of autumn

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autumn at Ichikawa by Kawase Hasui


Autumn Begins (初秋, hatsu aki) is a common kigo for early autumn. There are many variations of this kigo listed in my saijiki.[1] Another common one would be *jōshū (上秋), which would be a little closer to beginning of autumn. You might also see sōshū (早秋, early autumn) and aki ni iru (秋に入る, entering autumn). I could go on and on. This is why most saijiki are enormous, because there are just so many kigo.

I was also thinking of a haiku from Issa when I wrote mine. This one:

秋立といふばかりでも寒かな
aki tatsu to iu bakari demo samusa kana

autumn has started
just saying it
I feel cold

And indeed I felt cold; after being hot only a few minutes prior, before the rain started. Such is autumn weather, eh? Yet instead of reaching for a jacket, I pulled out a notecard and wrote the above haiku.

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Hi thereDavid LaSpina is an American photographer and translator lost in Japan, trying to capture the beauty of this country one photo at a time and searching for the perfect haiku.

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  1. A giant book listing many kigo—season words. I previously wrote a little about them. ↩

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