Steemit OpenMic 107 - Davood Faramarzi (@DavidFar) - Lost In This Shape - Original song - First release

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This is one of my recent original pieces, I wrote the lyrics months ago and I didn't had a music for it, Tonight I was reading it again and I started to performing it with my electric guitar and singing the vocals for it and at the end when I finished the first record there was an empty part in between which it was my guitar riff, so I decided to record a choir vocal on that part which it fits well.
so this is the first time you hear this song and this is it's first release. enjoy!

I want to thanks the Openmic team and sponsors! <3

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Lyrics :

I'm falling down
Deep in a sea
under mass of faults
having no sense

what have I done
troubles of mine
darkness of life
its taking me down

no will to be bad
no will to be sad
its not negative
but only a truth

I lost in this shape
this shape you can see
but I've never touched
out of this skin

what have I done
troubles of mine
darkness of life
its taking me down

check out my choon channel :
https://choon.co/artists/davoodfaramarzi

and our Band Channel with Darren Claxton called Broken Ocean, we have some great quality tracks :
https://choon.co/artists/brokenocean

I also want to thanks @lk666 <3 for always supporting me and other friends by publishing our metal and rock tracks with COD label and also by sharing our works.