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RE: TUNNEL AND VISION

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Ha, life beat the skin of a tender boy

  • brilliant line - very originally put

I'm not sure I have the context to understand this one, though:

Weak as the after rain cocks

This last part is triumphant and finishes the poem off beautifully:

So will I sit at Abuja rocks
Here I come.

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