There is actually a difference between talking and singing. Nice choice of song and also powerful lyrics, but please, you would have to work on how you let out air from your airpipe, learn how to shape your mouth in an oval form, and also sing from the stomach. Let your passion for singing spur you to work on the act of singing.
Vibes community is a community where you are groomed and rewarded for your act; Thanks to the community founder, moderators. With a platform as Vibes community and your passion for singing, I think you have enough reason to push on and never give up.
WELDONE 
