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This is a wonderful story, I couldn't stop reading until I was done. I thought her sister was the betrayer until she died. Even after she died, I never thought it could be aunty Ann.
I love the way you constructed the story, the suspense, the flow. Thumbs up.
My question is, how did Christian get in contact with the police, I thought she was a criminal, although you didn't state she that has a criminal record. But criminals don't like getting in contact with police.
I would be expecting your next writeup next month, keep it up.
RE: BETRAYED : A Short-Fictional Story Written By Okweri-Eric Odomero Golden