This story had me hooked! You captured the ups and downs of Toochi's romantic journey with humor and charm. The way Toochi's excitement turns into shock as Jenny devours the meal meant for both of them is brilliant. Relationships are full of surprises, and this one’s definitely memorable!

As for the judgment—maybe Toochi just needs to cook bigger portions or they both need to communicate better. Either way, it’s a funny moment they’ll probably laugh about later. Keep writing these engaging stories—they really bring everyday situations to life!