RE: RE: Welcome Pages on Our Front End: Please Help Proofread! WE NEED YOU!
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riverflows@riverflows: I hope this is understandable and helpful. I'll keep going as I can. I really love Natural Medicine, even though I don't post.

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 em dash instead of hyphen, of natural medicine – from herbalism...
 Confused wording. Suggested change: from herbalism, essential oils and food as medicine, to meditation and spirituality, as well as...
 add hyphen and correct spelling of 'centered', earth-centered

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 nonrestrictive clause, add comma after 'supported', supported, from ayurveda...

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 sometimes external link icon, sometimes not, is there a way to make it consistent?
Lotus for Yogis, lowercase 'f' as in other titles, all caps 'LOTUS' in each title

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similar correct spelling
Steem blockchain STEEM all caps only in reference to the token

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email us at at welcome... delete second use of 'at'
 em dash instead of hyphen, account processing – we're very much...
receive correct spelling

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 hyphenate non-natural-medicine-related, use en dash between 'non' and 'natural'
 parenthesis, delete 'or', and 'dapps' (decentralised apps)
 wrong link for Steempeak

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 change contraction 'it's' to possessive pronoun 'its' 2x
and the its link delete 'the'
Steem platform change to lowercase except first letter

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