Thank you!

A good feeling to this poem

sea fever...the lonely sea and the sky :)

you have a very unique way of writing dialogue, Mr. Oliver. Are you sure you're not famous? Good work

interesting

Beautiful colour and lovely macro shots. I feel like a bird on a wire :) The quotes are really beautiful and significant

life is a mystery it seems

I wish I could write as mysterious as a cat - Poe

peculiar why demons would want to clothe themselves...must be a spiritual reason for that

the photos are beautiful and relaxing as well - Very Peaceful

nothing like open air skating in nippy weather to make you appreciate a fire

seems Hailey and her friends underestimated how dangerous her stalker really was - Does not look good and she's in a remote location

I can't see Alicia killing Hailey, but maybe Archibald Leech?

At last some details will be forthcoming on Hailey's dark family secrets. Who thought Birdie might hold the keys?

love the second shot with the boiling water and pebbles

love listening to waves

lovely trees

a stalker who's a religious fanatic -and indirectly threatens death...very disturbing

excellent! Getting very scary!

Your plot is thickening! Looking good :)